It seems static... almost automatic... a small shift in detail, only on local scale... like minor changes, repeated for ages... pointless contribution, lacking evolution... so is the perception. Why ? Evolution seems missing. Stillness... is so convincing. Acting on what we perceive, we... are so naive. The world is expanding, against our understanding. What should we do with our narrow view ?
Nice work, really nice work. Full of meaning, full of subtlety and at the same time well structured and put into place. The poems seen here pack quite a punch.